From fa3eba3a226ebd93c306ed4e7af581cfb9ff2f55 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kyle Drake Date: Tue, 22 Apr 2014 10:32:44 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] more and more copy --- views/about.erb | 4 ++-- 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-) diff --git a/views/about.erb b/views/about.erb index 23412fa7..cd07be48 100644 --- a/views/about.erb +++ b/views/about.erb @@ -29,10 +29,10 @@ We can do this without selling out to the marketing industry, and we're going to prove it.

- It's a tough project. We've got big problems to solve, and big ambitions (restrained by our big principles). We have a lot of work to do. But our goal is clear: to enable you to harness the creativity, beauty, and power of creating your own web site. To rebuild the web we lost to monotony, and make it fun again. + It's a tough project. We've got big problems to solve (restrained from easier solutions by our principles), and big ambitions. We have a lot of work to do. But our goal is clear: to enable you to harness the creativity, beauty, and power of creating your own web site. To rebuild the web we lost to monotony, and make it fun again.

- Neocities is just getting started, and we've got a lot of amazing things in store. I strongly believe that, with your help, we're going to really shake things up on the web. Thank you for believing in us (and yourselves). + Neocities is just getting started, and we've got a lot of amazing things in store. I strongly believe that, with your help, we're really going to shake things up on the web. Thank you for believing in us (and yourselves).

Long Live the Web!