From d525bf6dee4b291d3ab1d168787401c071d04235 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle Drake <kyle@kyledrake.net>
Date: Fri, 13 May 2016 16:44:11 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] Copy updates for welcome screen

---
 views/welcome.erb | 12 ++++++------
 1 file changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diff --git a/views/welcome.erb b/views/welcome.erb
index 2dfa1741..bccaa805 100644
--- a/views/welcome.erb
+++ b/views/welcome.erb
@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@
           <div class="interval">per month</div>
 
           <ul class="main-features">
-            <li><strong><%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:free][:space].to_space_pretty %></strong> <span data-original-title="How much disk space you can use for your site. More space means you can upload more files.">storage</span></li>
-            <li><strong><%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:free][:bandwidth].to_space_pretty %></strong> <span data-original-title="How much content you can serve in one month. Don’t worry—these are soft limits. Temporary surges are fine, we won't take your site down automatically, and we're very flexible.">bandwidth</span></li>
+            <li><strong><%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:free][:space].to_space_pretty %></strong> <span data-original-title="How much space you have to upload files. The more space, the bigger your site can be.">storage</span></li>
+            <li><strong><%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:free][:bandwidth].to_space_pretty %></strong> <span data-original-title="How much traffic can visit your site. This is a soft limit. Temporary surges are fine, we won't take your site down automatically, and we're very flexible.">bandwidth</span></li>
           </ul>
         </div>
       </div>
@@ -41,14 +41,14 @@
           <% end %>
 
           <ul class="main-features">
-            <li><strong><%= (Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:supporter][:space] / (10**6)).to_comma_separated %> MB</strong> <span data-original-title="How much disk space you can use for your site. More space means you can upload more files.">storage</span></li>
-            <li><strong><%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:supporter][:bandwidth].to_bytes_pretty %></strong> <span data-original-title="How much content you can serve in one month. Don’t worry—these are soft limits. Temporary surges are fine, we won't take your site down automatically, and we’re very flexible.">bandwidth</span></li>
+            <li><strong><%= (Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:supporter][:space] / (10**6)).to_comma_separated %> MB</strong> <span data-original-title="Much more disk space, so you can build a much bigger web site.">storage</span></li>
+            <li><strong><%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:supporter][:bandwidth].to_bytes_pretty %></strong> <span data-original-title="Tons of bandwidth to serve your site, powered by our high-quality network of servers. This is a soft limit. Temporary surges are fine, we won't take your site down automatically, and we're very flexible.">bandwidth</span></li>
           </ul>
 
           <ul>
-            <li><span data-original-title="You can upload anything you like (static hosting only, no copyrighted/illegal content)">No File Upload Type Restrictions</span></li>
+            <li><span data-original-title="Free plans don't allow uploading music, video, compressed, and executable files to prevent piracy. With a supporter plan, you can upload anything you want.">No File Upload Type Restrictions</span></li>
             <li><span data-original-title="Make as many sites as you want with one account, and easily switch between them.">Unlimited Site Creation</span></li>
-            <li><span data-original-title="Add your domain name (yoursite.com) to your site!">Full Domain Support</span></li>
+            <li><span data-original-title="Add your domain name (yoursite.com) to your site!">Custom Domain Support</span></li>
             <li><span data-original-title="With WebDAV, you can mount your Neocities site to your computer as a hard drive, making it easy to update with your favorite HTML editor.">Remote Filesystem Support</span></li>
           </ul>
         </div>