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       <h3><i class="fa fa-edit"></i> HTML editor, right in your browser</h3>
-      <p>No tools needed! With our easy-to-use HTML editor, you're ready to start building your awesome web site right now.</p>
+      <p>No tools needed. With our easy-to-use HTML editor, you're ready to start building your awesome web site right now.</p>
-      <p>If you'd rather use your favorite desktop editor, no problem! Uploading files is as easy as drag-and-drop. We also support WebDAV uploading for <a href="/plan">supporter accounts</a>.</p>
+      <p>If you'd rather use your favorite desktop editor, no problem. Uploading files is as easy as drag-n-drop.</p>
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-      <h3><i class="fa fa-globe"></i> It's time to bring back web surfing!</h3>
+      <h3><i class="fa fa-globe"></i> It's time to bring back web surfing.</h3>
-      <p>We collect all Neocities sites in our <a href="/browse">website gallery</a>. We make it easy to browse sites with our optional surf bar.</p>
+      <p>All Neocities sites are viewable in our <a href="/browse">website gallery</a>. And it's easy to browse sites with our optional surf bar.</p>
-      <p>Using tags, our version of web rings, you can easily discover new sites related to your interests.</p>
+      <p>Using tags (our version of Web Rings) you can easily discover new sites related to your interests.</p>
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       <h3><i class="fa fa-user-plus"></i> Follow your favorite Neocities sites</h3>
-      <p>Once you find some interesting sites in our website gallery, you can keep track of all new updates by following them. Any changes to the sites show up in your news feed. You'll also see what sites are followed by your favorite site builders.</p>
+      <p>Keep track of all your favorite sites by following them. Any changes to the sites automatically show up in your news feed. You'll also see what sites they follow.</p>
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       <h3><i class="fa fa-comments-o"></i> Web creativity plus community</h3>
-      <p>Interact with your favorite web builders by posting comments, liking updates, and sharing their sites on your social network of choice!</p>
+      <p>Interact with your favorite web builders by posting comments, and sharing their sites on your social network of choice.</p>
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