From 4a24983bb5c4d41d8f9dd0a58a948146a27b61a2 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Victoria Wang <violasong@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 21 Jul 2015 11:56:53 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] Wording changes to current /tutorials page

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 views/tutorials.erb | 18 ++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

diff --git a/views/tutorials.erb b/views/tutorials.erb
index c7e3a97b..da47fb19 100644
--- a/views/tutorials.erb
+++ b/views/tutorials.erb
@@ -1,23 +1,21 @@
 <div class="header-Outro">
   <div class="row content single-Col">
-  <h1>Learn How to Make Web Sites!</h1>
+  <h1>Learn How to Make Websites!</h1>
   </div>
 </div>
 
 <div class="content single-Col misc-page">
-  <p>Learning how to make web sites is one of the most important things you can learn. It allows you to create any content you want, arrange that content in any way you like, and share that content with the world. Be it an <a href="http://sheldonbrown.com" target="_blank">information portal for teaching people how to repair bikes</a>, or an interesting graphics project, or your poetry. These are things you can't do with traditional social networks, but that you can do with HTML.</p>
+  <p>Learning how to make websites allows you to create any content you want, arrange that content in any way you like, and share that content with the world. It could be an information portal for teaching people <a href="http://sheldonbrown.com" target="_blank">how to repair bikes</a>, a graphics project, or a collection of your poetry.</p>
 
   <p class="delta">
-    We are currently building out our library of tutorials.
+        Coming Soon: <a href="https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/1262953102/neocities-30-an-interactive-html-css-course-for-ev">The Neocities HTML/CSS course</a>!
   </p>
 
-  <p>
-    Until then, please check out the following links to get you started:
-  </p>
+  <p>We are currently fundraising for an interactive website building tutorial that will work seamlessly with Neocities. Until that project is complete, check out the following resources from other sites:</p>
 
   <h3>HTML</h3>
 
-  <p>HTML is short for "HyperText Markup Language", and is the basic building block used to build all web sites.</p>
+  <p>HTML is short for "HyperText Markup Language", and is the basic building block used to build all websites.</p>
 
   <ul>
     <li>
@@ -39,7 +37,7 @@
 
   <h3>CSS</h3>
 
-  <p>CSS is short for "Cascading Style Sheets", which is the code used to set the style of your web pages. It is embedded in your HTML, and directs how your web site should look. If HTML was your house, CSS would be what allows you to decorate the way it looks.</p>
+  <p>CSS is short for "Cascading Style Sheets", which is the code used to set the style of your web pages. It is embedded in your HTML, and directs how your website should look. If HTML was your house, CSS would be what allows you to decorate the way it looks.</p>
 
   <ul>
     <li>
@@ -49,7 +47,7 @@
 
   <h3>CSS Frameworks</h3>
 
-  <p>CSS frameworks are pre-built CSS styles that make it easy to quickly build a nice looking web page, without having to "roll your own" set of styles. Neocities itself uses one as the basis for our design (Brass Tacks). They are very useful, and definitely worth checking out once you have an understanding of how CSS works.</p>
+  <p>CSS frameworks are pre-built CSS styles that make it easy to quickly build a nice looking web page without having to "roll your own" set of styles. Neocities itself uses one as the basis for our design. They are definitely worth checking out once you have an understanding of how CSS works.</p>
   <ul>
     <li>
       <a href="http://getbootstrap.com" title="Bootstrap" target="_blank">Twitter Bootstrap</a>
@@ -66,7 +64,7 @@
   </ul>
 
   <h3>JavaScript</h3>
-  <p>JavaScript is the programming language that comes standard with all web browsers. You can embed JavaScript code into your HTML to allow you to program your web sites to do things. JavaScript was once a weak language with a lot of problems, but it is now a very fast and powerful language that is used for both web browsers and for complicated server backends (with Node.js). It is a great beginners language if you want to learn how to program, and can be used to perform almost any kind of program.</p>
+  <p>JavaScript is the programming language that comes standard with all web browsers. You can embed JavaScript code into your HTML to allow you to program your websites to do things. JavaScript was once a weak language with a lot of problems, but it is now a very fast and powerful language that is used for both web browsers and for complicated server backends (with Node.js). It is a great beginners language if you want to learn how to program, and can be used to perform almost any kind of program.</p>
 
   <ul>
     <li><a href="https://developer.mozilla.org/en-US/learn/javascript">Mozilla Learn JavaScript Resources</a></li>