From 67c8fba0db7a0a013d5aea4db31fbba0e4486795 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Kyle Drake <kyle@kyledrake.net>
Date: Mon, 21 Apr 2014 19:28:50 -0700
Subject: [PATCH] copy changes

---
 views/about.erb     | 41 +++++++++++++++++++++++------------------
 views/dashboard.erb |  3 ++-
 2 files changed, 25 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)

diff --git a/views/about.erb b/views/about.erb
index b703886f..bac6a656 100644
--- a/views/about.erb
+++ b/views/about.erb
@@ -1,12 +1,12 @@
 <div class="header-Outro">
   <div class="row content single-Col">
   <h1>About Neocities</h1>
-  <h3 class="subtitle"></h3>
+  <h3 class="subtitle">Neocities wants to make the web creative and fun again.</h3>
   </div>
 </div>
 
 <div class="content single-Col misc-page">
-  <h2>Help us keep the creative, independent Internet alive!</h2>
+  <h3></h3>
   <blockquote class="twitter-tweet">
     <p>I want to make another Geocities. Free web hosting, static HTML only, 10MB limit, anonymous, uncensored.</p>&mdash; Kyle Drake (@kyledrake)
     <a href="https://twitter.com/kyledrake/statuses/337706291801763841">May 23, 2013</a>
@@ -14,35 +14,40 @@
   <script async src="//platform.twitter.com/widgets.js" charset="utf-8"></script>
 
   <article>
-    <h3>My goal with Neocities is to help bring back the creativity and free expression to the world wide web that made it great. I need your help.</h3>
+    <h6>Neocities is bringing back the creativity and free expression that made the web great.</h6>
 
     <p>
-      I am tired of living in an online world where people are isolated from each other in
-      <b>boring, spied-on gated communities</b>, and are given generic templates which define what people are
-      supposed to know about each other. It's time we took back our personalities from these sterilized, lifeless,
+      We are tired of living in an online world where people are isolated from each other in
+      boring social networks, generic templates which define what people are
+      supposed to know or communicate with each other. It's time we took back our personalities from these sterilized, lifeless,
       monetized, monitored entities and let our creativity flourish again.
     </p>
 
     <p>
-      That's where Neocities comes in. I want to provide a canvas for people to make any web site they want.
+      That's where Neocities comes in. We provide a canvas for people to make any web site they want.
       Whether it be a web site about something they're good at, something they love, something they hate, or
-      their own custom "Profile" where they can introduce themselves in a way that actually matters to them.
+      their own custom "Profile" where they can introduce themselves in a way that actually matters to them. 
+      And we can do this without selling out to the marketing industry.
     </p>
     <p>
-      It's a big project (to make small sites), and I have a lot of work to do.
-      <b>But I can't do it without your help</b>.
+      It's a big project (to make small sites), and we have a lot of work to do.
+      .
     </p>
     <p>
-      The technology has become affordable enough where we can provide this creative space without requiring a business
-      plan that involves selling people out to the marketing industry. But it still costs money, especially since server
-      demand is so high right now. And there are some possible surprise costs I haven't figured out yet (bandwidth estimates are difficult).
-      <b>But if Neocities can get enough donations, Neocities can survive!</b>
-      Together, we can prevent
-      <a target="_blank" href="http://www.business-standard.com/article/technology/yahoo-writes-geocities-obituary-109042500035_1.html" title="What did happen to GeoCities?">what happened to GeoCities</a> from happening again.
+      <b>But we can't do it without you.</b> <a href="/donate">Help keep this idea alive by donating!</a> $100, $20, $5, a
+      free round of beers at your pub, speaking invites so we can spread the word, free server hosting.
     </p>
     <p>
-      Our creativity is too important to be commercialized. <a href="/donate">Help keep this idea alive by donating!</a> $100, $20, $5, a
-      free round of beers at your pub, speaking invites so we can spread the word, free server hosting, anything helps. Thank you!
+      Neocities is just getting started, and we've got a lot of amazing things in store. Thanks for believing in us. We'll try very hard to not let you down.
+    </p>
+    <p>
+      Love,
+    </p>
+    <p>
+      -Kyle
+    </p>
+    <p>
+      PS: What are you waiting for? <a href="/new">Go make your web site!</a>
     </p>
   </article>
   <hr />
diff --git a/views/dashboard.erb b/views/dashboard.erb
index b8d741fa..2f23d40e 100644
--- a/views/dashboard.erb
+++ b/views/dashboard.erb
@@ -154,7 +154,8 @@
       </div>
 
 <div class="site-actions">
-  <a href="/site_files/<%= current_site.username %>.zip">Allowed file types</a> | <a href="/site_files/<%= current_site.username %>.zip">Download entire site</a>
+  <!-- <a href="/site_files/<%= current_site.username %>.zip">Allowed file types</a> | -->
+  <a href="/site_files/<%= current_site.username %>.zip">Download entire site</a>
 </div>
 
 </div>