From 289e17134c7ab5735ace04b126832981f7b9bbaa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Kyle Drake Date: Fri, 17 Oct 2014 19:06:04 -0700 Subject: [PATCH] more copy changes --- views/index.erb | 4 ++-- views/plan/_pricing.erb | 17 ++++++----------- views/stats.erb | 2 +- 3 files changed, 9 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) diff --git a/views/index.erb b/views/index.erb index 3dbe2f36..0c3bc2d1 100644 --- a/views/index.erb +++ b/views/index.erb @@ -257,12 +257,12 @@

Open Company

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Neocities is a member of the Open Company Initative, working to help improve trustability in tech startups. We publish the code that powers the site for inspection, and keep open records for everyone to inspect. And if someone sends a bad takedown request, we fight it. We want to win your trust - not lock you in.

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Neocities is a member of the Open Company Initative, working to help improve trustability in tech companies. We publish the code that powers the site for inspection, and keep open records for everyone to inspect. And if someone sends a bad takedown request, we fight it. We want to win your trust - not lock you in.

Zero advertising

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Neocities does not sell your personal data, or put ads on your site. In fact, we're prohibited from doing that in our own Terms of Service. We want to build a startup the old fashioned way - by helping people be awesome.

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Neocities does not sell your personal data, or put ads on your site. In fact, we're prohibited from doing that in our own Terms of Service. We want to succeed the old fashioned way - by providing a great service that helps people be awesome.

diff --git a/views/plan/_pricing.erb b/views/plan/_pricing.erb index a33cf745..24bfe250 100644 --- a/views/plan/_pricing.erb +++ b/views/plan/_pricing.erb @@ -24,7 +24,6 @@
  • <%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:free][:bandwidth].to_space_pretty %> bandwidth
  • @@ -39,8 +38,8 @@
  • <%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:supporter][:bandwidth].to_space_pretty %> bandwidth
  • @@ -56,12 +55,10 @@
  • <%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:catbus][:bandwidth].to_space_pretty %> bandwidth
  • @@ -76,12 +73,10 @@
  • <%= Site::PLAN_FEATURES[:fatcat][:bandwidth].to_space_pretty %> bandwidth
  • diff --git a/views/stats.erb b/views/stats.erb index 5655e024..765ec063 100644 --- a/views/stats.erb +++ b/views/stats.erb @@ -69,7 +69,7 @@

    Subscriptions

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    Current Recurring Revenue: <%= format("$%.2f", @stats[:total_recurring_revenue]) %> +

    Current Recurring Revenue: <%= format("$%.2f", @stats[:total_recurring_revenue]) %> (<%= format("$%.2f", @stats[:total_recurring_revenue]/12.0) %>/month)
    Active Subscriptions: <%= @stats[:subscriptions].select {|s| s[:status] == 'active' }.length %>