diff --git a/views/index.erb b/views/index.erb
index 49a62171..39386f07 100644
--- a/views/index.erb
+++ b/views/index.erb
@@ -116,16 +116,16 @@
 <div class="header-Outro">
   <div class="row header-Content content">
     <div class="col intro">
-    <h2 class="section-header">Make your own web site, and discover new ones.</h2>
+    <h2 class="section-header">Make your own free website and discover new favorites.</h2>
     <p class="intro-text">
-     Neocities is a community of <a href="/browse"><%= @sites_count.to_s.reverse.gsub(/...(?=.)/,'\&,').reverse %> websites</a> that are bringing back creative expression on the web. Anyone can make a site, only your imagination is required. We provide the space, you provide the web site ideas. Join us!
+     Neocities is a community of <a href="/browse"><%= @sites_count.to_s.reverse.gsub(/...(?=.)/,'\&,').reverse %> websites</a> that are bringing back creative expression on the web. Anyone can make a site—only your imagination is required. We provide the space, you provide the ideas. Join us!
     </p>
     <ul class="intro-List">
       <li class="intro-Social">
         <span class="intro-Icon"></span>
         <h2 class="delta">Share your web creation with the world</h2>
         <p class="base">
-          Follow your favorite Neocities sites to keep up with all the latest updates. Discover new websites related to your interests, comment on them, and share them. Unlimited creativity—and zero ads.
+          Follow your favorite Neocities sites to keep up with all their latest updates. Discover new websites related to your interests, comment on them, and share them. Unlimited creativity, zero ads.
         </p>
       </li>
       <li class="intro-Tools">