From ce23849a31679bb716003e438e56850f7727b29e Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michelle Rago <60157596+michelle-rago@users.noreply.github.com> Date: Mon, 13 Nov 2023 17:56:15 -0500 Subject: [PATCH] Domain management text updates (#1328) * Update application_authorizing_official.html * Update domain_authorizing_official.html * Update domain_dns.html * Update domain_nameservers.html * Update domain_users.html * Update domain_your_contact_information.html --- src/registrar/templates/application_authorizing_official.html | 2 +- src/registrar/templates/domain_authorizing_official.html | 2 +- src/registrar/templates/domain_dns.html | 2 +- src/registrar/templates/domain_nameservers.html | 2 +- src/registrar/templates/domain_users.html | 1 + src/registrar/templates/domain_your_contact_information.html | 2 +- 6 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/application_authorizing_official.html b/src/registrar/templates/application_authorizing_official.html index 859a47520..08df404a3 100644 --- a/src/registrar/templates/application_authorizing_official.html +++ b/src/registrar/templates/application_authorizing_official.html @@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ Who is the authorizing official for your organization? -

Your authorizing official is the person within your organization who can authorize your domain request. This person must be in a role of significant, executive responsibility within the organization.

+

Your authorizing official is a person within your organization who can authorize your domain request. This person must be in a role of significant, executive responsibility within the organization.

{% include "includes/ao_example.html" %} diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/domain_authorizing_official.html b/src/registrar/templates/domain_authorizing_official.html index 93b4b1b50..57a315e86 100644 --- a/src/registrar/templates/domain_authorizing_official.html +++ b/src/registrar/templates/domain_authorizing_official.html @@ -9,7 +9,7 @@

Authorizing official

-

Your authorizing official is the person within your organization who can +

Your authorizing official is a person within your organization who can authorize domain requests. This person must be in a role of significant, executive responsibility within the organization. Read more about who can serve as an authorizing official.

{% include "includes/required_fields.html" %} diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/domain_dns.html b/src/registrar/templates/domain_dns.html index 45529a19e..85ba02e16 100644 --- a/src/registrar/templates/domain_dns.html +++ b/src/registrar/templates/domain_dns.html @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@

DNS

-

The Domain Name System (DNS) is the internet service that translates your domain name into an IP address. Before your .gov domain can be used, you'll need to connect it to your DNS hosting service and provide us with your name server information.

+

The Domain Name System (DNS) is the internet service that translates your domain name into an IP address. Before your .gov domain can be used, you'll need to connect it to a DNS hosting service and provide us with your name server information.

You can enter your name servers, as well as other DNS-related information, in the following sections:

diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/domain_nameservers.html b/src/registrar/templates/domain_nameservers.html index 59968c13d..ad718ad75 100644 --- a/src/registrar/templates/domain_nameservers.html +++ b/src/registrar/templates/domain_nameservers.html @@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
-

Add an IP address only when your name server's address includes your domain name (e.g., if your domain name is “example.gov” and your name server is “ns1.example.gov,” then an IP address is required.) To add multiple IP addresses, separate them with commas.

+

Add an IP address only when your name server's address includes your domain name (e.g., if your domain name is “example.gov” and your name server is “ns1.example.gov,” then an IP address is required). Multiple IP addresses must be separated with commas.

This step is uncommon unless you self-host your DNS or use custom addresses for your nameserver.

diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/domain_users.html b/src/registrar/templates/domain_users.html index 7d522a515..e1ea0b601 100644 --- a/src/registrar/templates/domain_users.html +++ b/src/registrar/templates/domain_users.html @@ -19,6 +19,7 @@
  • To remove a domain manager, contact us for assistance.
    • +
  • All domain managers must keep their contact information updated and be responsive if contacted by the .gov team.
    • {% if domain.permissions %} diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/domain_your_contact_information.html b/src/registrar/templates/domain_your_contact_information.html index e2cad735f..871cb5120 100644 --- a/src/registrar/templates/domain_your_contact_information.html +++ b/src/registrar/templates/domain_your_contact_information.html @@ -7,7 +7,7 @@

    Your contact information

    -

    If you’d like us to use a different name, email, or phone number you can make those changes below. Updating your contact information here will update the contact information for all domains in your account. However, it won’t affect your Login.gov account information. +

    If you’d like us to use a different name, email, or phone number you can make those changes below. Updating your contact information here will update the contact information for all domains in your account. Changing your information here won’t affect your Login.gov account information. The contact information you provide here won’t be made public and will only be used for the .gov program.

    {% include "includes/required_fields.html" %}