diff --git a/src/registrar/templates/emails/status_change_approved.txt b/src/registrar/templates/emails/status_change_approved.txt
index e16b3e3e7..f91cac760 100644
--- a/src/registrar/templates/emails/status_change_approved.txt
+++ b/src/registrar/templates/emails/status_change_approved.txt
@@ -5,27 +5,39 @@ Congratulations! Your .gov domain request has been approved.
 
 DOMAIN REQUESTED: {{ application.requested_domain.name }}
 REQUEST RECEIVED ON: {{ application.submission_date|date }}
-REQUEST #: {{ application.id }}
 STATUS: In review
 
-Now that your .gov domain has been approved, there are a few more things to do before your domain can be used. 
+You can manage your approved domain on the .gov registrar. <https://manage.get.gov>
 
 
-YOU MUST ADD DOMAIN NAME SERVER INFORMATION
+ADD DOMAIN NAME SERVER INFORMATION
 
-Before your .gov domain can be used, you have to connect it to your Domain Name System (DNS) hosting service. At this time, we don’t provide DNS hosting services.
-Go to the domain management page to add your domain name server information <https://manage.get.gov/domain/{{ application.approved_domain.id }}/nameservers>.
+Before your .gov domain can be used, you’ll first need to connect it to a Domain Name System (DNS) hosting service. At this time, we don’t provide DNS hosting services. 
 
-Get help with adding your domain name server information <https://get.gov/help/domain-management/#manage-dns-information-for-your-domain>.
+After you’ve set up hosting, you’ll need to enter your name server information on the .gov registrar. 
+
+Learn more about: 
+
+- Finding a DNS hosting service <https://get.gov/domains/moving/#find-dns-hosting-services>
+
+- Adding name servers <https://get.gov/help/domain-management/#manage-dns-name-servers>.
 
 
 ADD DOMAIN MANAGERS, SECURITY EMAIL
 
-We strongly recommend that you add other points of contact who will help manage your domain. We also recommend that you provide a security email. This email will allow the public to report security issues on your domain. Security emails are made public. 
+Currently, you’re the only person who can manage this domain. Please keep your contact information updated. 
 
-Go to the domain management page to add domain contacts <https://manage.get.gov/domain/{{ application.approved_domain.id }}/your-contact-information> and a security email <https://manage.get.gov/domain/{{ application.approved_domain.id }}/security-email>.
+We strongly recommend adding other domain managers who can serve as additional contacts. We also recommend providing a security email that the public can use to report security issues on your domain. 
 
-Get help with managing your .gov domain <https://get.gov/help/domain-management/>.
+You can add domain managers and a security email on the .gov registrar. 
+
+Learn more about:
+
+- Adding domain managers <https://beta.get.gov/help/domain-management/#add-a-domain-manager-to-your-.gov-domain>
+
+- Adding a security email <https://beta.get.gov/help/domain-management/#add-or-update-the-security-email-for-your-.gov-domain>
+
+- Domain security best practices <https://beta.get.gov/domains/security/> 
 
 
 THANK YOU
@@ -36,5 +48,5 @@ THANK YOU
 
 The .gov team
 Contact us: <https://get.gov/contact/>
-Visit <https://get.gov>
+Learn about .gov <https://get.gov>
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