Merge pull request #1618 from cisagov/ky/domain-request-updates

Domain-request content updates (Part 1)

src/registrar/forms/application_wizard.py

@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ class TribalGovernmentForm(RegistrarForm):
     )
 
     tribe_name = forms.CharField(
-        label="What is the name of the tribe you represent?",
+        label="Name of tribe",
         error_messages={"required": "Enter the tribe you represent."},
     )
 

src/registrar/templates/application_about_your_organization.html

@@ -2,14 +2,16 @@
 {% load field_helpers %}
 
 {% block form_instructions %}
-  <p>We’d like to know more about your organization. Include the following in your response: </p>
+  <p>To help us determine your eligibility for a .gov domain, we need to know more about your organization. For example:</p>
   
     <ul class="usa-list">
       <li>The type of work your organization does </li>
-      <li>How your organization is a government organization that is independent of a state government </li>
-      <li>Include links to authorizing legislation, applicable bylaws or charter, or other documentation to support your claims.</li>
+      <li>How your organization operates independently from a state government</li>
+      <li>A description of the specialized, essential services you offer (if applicable)</li>
+      <li>Links to authorizing legislation, applicable bylaws or charter, or other documentation to support your claims</li>
     </ul>
   </p>
+<h2>What can you tell us about your organization?</h2>
 {% endblock %}
 
 {% block form_required_fields_help_text %}
@@ -20,4 +22,4 @@
     {% with attr_maxlength=1000 add_label_class="usa-sr-only" %}
       {% input_with_errors forms.0.about_your_organization %}
     {% endwith %}
-{% endblock %}
+{% endblock %}

src/registrar/templates/application_authorizing_official.html

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@
     {% include "includes/ao_example.html" %}
   </div>
 
-<p>We typically don’t reach out to the authorizing official, but if contact is necessary, our practice is to coordinate first with you, the requestor. Read more about <a class="usa-link" rel="noopener noreferrer" target="_blank" href="{% public_site_url 'domains/eligibility/#you-must-have-approval-from-an-authorizing-official-within-your-organization' %}">who can serve as an authorizing official</a>.</p>
+<p>We typically don’t reach out to the authorizing official, but if contact is necessary, our practice is to coordinate with you, the requestor, first.</p>
 
 {% endblock %}
 

src/registrar/templates/application_current_sites.html

@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@
 {% load static field_helpers %}
 
 {% block form_instructions %}
-  <p>Enter your organization’s current public website, if you have one. For example,
-  www.city.com. We can better evaluate your domain request if we know about domains 
-you’re already using. If you already have any .gov domains please include them. This question is optional.</p>
+  <p>We can better evaluate your request if we know about domains you’re already using.</p>
+  <h2>What are the current websites for your organization?</h2>
+  <p>Enter your organization’s current public websites. If you already have a .gov domain, include that in your list. This question is optional.</p>
 {% endblock %}
 
 {% block form_required_fields_help_text %}

src/registrar/templates/application_org_contact.html

@@ -2,15 +2,12 @@
 {% load field_helpers %}
 
 {% block form_instructions %}
-  <h2 class="margin-bottom-05">
-    What is the name and mailing address of your organization?
-  </h2>
+  <p>If your domain request is approved, the name of your organization and your city/state will be listed in <a href="https://beta.get.gov/about/data/" target="_blank">.gov’s public data.</a></p>  
 
-  <p>Enter the name of the organization you represent. Your organization might be part
-  of a larger entity. If so, enter information about your part of the larger entity.</p>
+  <h2>What is the name and mailing address of the organization you represent?</h2>
+
+  <p>Your organization might be part of a larger entity. If so, enter the name of your part of the larger entity. </p>
 
-  <p>If your domain request is approved, the name of your organization will be publicly
-  listed as the domain registrant.</p>
 {% endblock %}
 
 
@@ -43,4 +40,4 @@
     {% input_with_errors forms.0.urbanization %}
 
   </fieldset>
-{% endblock %}
+{% endblock %}

src/registrar/templates/application_org_election.html

@@ -2,9 +2,11 @@
 {% load field_helpers %}
 
 {% block form_instructions %}
-  <h2 class="margin-bottom-05">Is your organization an election office?</h2>
+  
 
-  <p>An election office is a government entity whose <em>primary</em> responsibility is overseeing elections and/or conducting voter registration.</p>
+  <p>An election office is a government entity whose primary responsibility is overseeing elections and/or conducting voter registration. If your organization is an election office, we'll prioritize your request.</p>
+
+  <h2>Is your organization an election office?</h2>
 
   <p>Answer “yes” only if the <em>main purpose</em> of your organization is to serve as an election office.</p>
 

src/registrar/templates/application_tribal_government.html

@@ -1,24 +1,24 @@
 {% extends 'application_form.html' %}
 {% load field_helpers %}
 
+{% block form_instructions %}
+  <p>To help us determine your eligibility for a .gov domain, we need to know more about your tribal government.</p>
+{% endblock %}
 
 {% block form_fields %}
 
-  {% with sublabel_text="Please include the entire name of your tribe as recognized by the Bureau of Indian Affairs." %}
-    {% with link_text="Bureau of Indian Affairs" %}
-      {% with link_href="https://www.federalregister.gov/documents/2023/01/12/2023-00504/indian-entities-recognized-by-and-eligible-to-receive-services-from-the-united-states-bureau-of" %}
-        {% with external_link="true" target_blank="true" %}
-          {% input_with_errors forms.0.tribe_name %}
-        {% endwith %}
-      {% endwith %}
-    {% endwith %}
+  <h2>What is the name of the tribe you represent?</h2>
+  <p>Please include the full name of your tribe as recognized by the <a rel="noopener noreferrer" class="usa-link usa-link--external" href="https://www.federalregister.gov/documents/2024/01/08/2024-00109/indian-entities-recognized-by-and-eligible-to-receive-services-from-the-united-states-bureau-of" target="_blank">Bureau of Indian Affairs</a>.</p>
+
+  {% with external_link="true" target_blank="true" %}
+    {% input_with_errors forms.0.tribe_name %}
   {% endwith %}
 
   <fieldset class="usa-fieldset">
     <legend class="usa-legend">
-      <p>Is your organization a federally-recognized tribe or a state-recognized tribe? Check all that apply.
-      <abbr class="usa-hint usa-hint--required" title="required">*</abbr></p>
+      <h2>Is your organization a federally-recognized tribe or a state-recognized tribe?</h2>
     </legend>
+    <p>Check all that apply. <abbr class="usa-hint usa-hint--required" title="required">*</abbr></p>
     {% input_with_errors forms.0.federally_recognized_tribe %}
     {% input_with_errors forms.0.state_recognized_tribe %}
   </fieldset>